Why is it so important to detail out each scene and still leave a little left for the imagination? As I have said in previous blogs, your own imagination is much better than almost any detailed description. Therefore, my job as a writer is to provide just enough background to allow the reader’s imagination to flow.
This is usually based around the setting – what decade and what level of poverty? Let’s face it, a rich house in the 1920’s would have a hidden liquor cabinet, maids and cooks and their hallways would smell like lemon wax. A poor home in the 1920’s would be very cluttered by family members who were just making ends meet. There would be no signs of maids, or high polished floors. The smells would probably include body odor and dirt, even in homes where adults were trying hard to survive. That would be the difference – living and surviving.